Amazing, action-packed chapter. I love how you highlighted all the strangeness around Sirius’s behavior leading up to the confrontation, his offer, and even attire. And I love the watcher in the shadows.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 28 Mar 2015 9:04 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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"Harry nodded, but didn't know what else to say. Sirius was still dressed in his prisoner's uniform, which Harry found a bit odd as he'd broken out nearly a year before, and surely could have found some new clothes in that time."
Ahahahah. Indeed.
Oh I cannot wait for you to update! I am loving this story and how it's still playing along with canon a little bit, but has it's own make and mark. I always love when Snape watches out for Harry more and they develop a relationship. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Oh no, Peter got away! I hope this doesn't turn out like the cannon version. Please update again soon!
I enjoyed Snape's reaction to Dumbledore. Avenge me. Hahahahaha. I also like the way Harry is now thinking more before he acts. I certainly wondered why Sirius tore up the bedcurtains and the Fat Lady's portrait. His relationship with Snape is interesting and they seem to get along well.
Shame Sirius still has to hide away, but hopefully Severus will indeed let Harry visit him from time to time. Hope Remus is alright....
"Take note, John," Snape said, his voice oddly calm. "As your guardian I ask that you avenge me, because one day you will find me drooling in the corner, unresponsive, and it will be because I have had a stroke. And it will be entirely the fault of the Headmaster."
Yes. Albus certainly has that effect on people, doesn't he? :P Excellent update - I eagerly look forward to the next and hope it comes soon!
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