That was a great twist on canon! I really enjoyed it.
I always hated the tournament in the canon book. So nasty to risk dragons eggs in a stupid school competition. Poor dragons.
Nice story! I like it very much. Snape is very much Snape and not a total mush like in some stories.
I hope Harry will abandon Ron as a best friend and friends Neville instead.
Happy year 2013 too!
I love this! Everything from Sev liking to game and using thay as his method for occulmency to Harry being tattooed to protect him. Dumbles is a bit of a jerk towards Sev, isn't he? I can't wait to see what happens when Harry finds out about the prophecy and who gave it to the dark lord. Also what happens when Sirius finds out that Sev is Harry's choice for a dad/guardian.
Awesome, awesome, awesome! :-)
Greatly enjoying this story!
Smaug. :3 You have no idea how very happy the frequent Hobbit references make me. Brilliantly utilized, too. Nice chapter - eagerly awaiting the next.
Phew, that was close.
Glad Harry survived that task, like in the book. Like your twist on Canon though. Good job.
| Title: Chapter 11
| 06 Jan 2013 4:31 am
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| Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying the story. Reading a new chapter each week is one of the highlights of my weekend. You are an excellent writer.
Oh my goodness , quite a lot going on in this chapter! I truly enjoyed reading all the action plus the dynamics between Harry and Severus. t Love reading their interaction. Please update again soon. :)
This is one of my favorite stories by far. I am super curious to learn how much Snape knows about the Dursleys--more than Harry thinks he does, I imagine. It's nice to see Harry have some real help during the Triwizard Tournament. I hope Snape can do something in time to thwart Voldemort's potion.
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