Terrific chapter. I’m glad that they plan to go on the offensive.
what a wonderful chapter. great observation how Snape noticed the Nagini damaged grass!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 21 Jan 2013 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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I really like your story. The way Severus oszillates between keeping his best from Harry and caring for him in possibly the only way a boy with Harry's history of neglect and abuse could stomach is very much in character for both of them, in my opinion. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 21 Jan 2013 12:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great one-liner...'Stride with purpose'
Gotta love it!!!!
Ah Sev, what you are is epitome of Slytherin bravery!
So will Sev have to deal with Sirius trying to steal his son over the summer?
A lot happening in this chapter! Please update again soon! I'm really enjoying this story, especially Harry and Snape's interactions.
Totally blown away! This is so original and exciting! Great work.
Is Snape going to have to spy in this? I can only imagine if he went home after a torture session with Voldemort and Harry saw him, how Harry would react. Also, I love Snape's last line!
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