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Reviews For Far Beyond a Promise Kept
Harry! Don't blink!
One question though: Could it be that you watched "Blink"? Just a thought, after the angels that might be moving, creepy statues and all that jazz (It took me some time to recover from that particular episode. It's not very beneficial to be afraid of statues when you're having art lessons twice a week) That aside, I love how you describe the relationship between those two and how you work those transitions into the chapters without making them awkward (for example when Harry started calling Snape Dad). And you did really well on making Snape human. I always think it's quite difficult, because he seems like some inhuman meanie who never sleeps, never smiles and stuff like that. I guess I'm not going to sleep tonight before finishing your whole story... (btw another thing I love are the long chapters ^___^) Author's Response: Oh yes, I'm definitely a Whovian. ;) weeping angels are CREEPY, so naturally, the Dark Lord has them. Thanks for the great compliments!
Have you ever thought to submit it to Fanfiction.net Author's Response: Hello! Glad you're enjoying it. It is already up at fanfiction.net, under the same penname there. If you're looking at my other stories, be warned that I write both gen/mentor AND slash (though not in the same story). http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2233941/oliver-snape
Things are sure to get complicated the closer Sirius gets to trying to get custody of Harry. On the positive side of things, the defense lessons are going well :).
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Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
I am really curious, what SnapeĀ“s plan will be. Thank you for updating so often. The story is nicely long by now, and many author start slowing down after 100000 words. I am glad you write right on! |
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