Title: Chapter 17
| 09 Jun 2015 6:51 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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The amount of pulling on heart strings you did to me was more than when I dissected a heart. They were fun to pluck. :P Many times I had to put my tablet down because the sweetness was just too wonderful. I loved the fake kidnap scene. I knew it was Snape and loved how you went into great detail. Many writers get caught up in the plot and forget the details. You obviously didn't. Ten points for picking apart the characters and getting inside their minds.
Title: Chapter 17
| 11 Mar 2015 7:39 pm
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Reviewer: camp6311 (Anonymous)
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Just finished reading this story and thoroughly enjoyed it. I loved the ending, I've always thought Dumbledore and company could have done more to prevent Voldemort from regaining his full power.
Title: Chapter 17
| 28 Jan 2014 5:46 pm
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Reviewer: Kyoko (Anonymous)
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I absolutely loved this story! Even more so than the one with little Elliot, because this one was a little less fluffy. I love fluffiness, but this story was really realistic and I think both Harry and Snape were very well in character which is important for me. Great story!
Excellent! I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you!
I really really liked this story ! Thank you for giving it to us.
Wonderful, wonderful! I'm just starting to read fanfic again, after a few years of being away. This story is a wonderful and promising start. I hope to read more from you and I hope others write as well as you.
Thank you for this wonderful story.
I enjoyed how natural the relationship between Snape and Harry felt. You didn't force it and that, together with the brilliant plot, make the story very special. I really loved it.
Bravo!
I have thoroughly enjoyed this tale from its inception to this rather satisfying conclusion. You've done an exceptional job in crafting this story - I loved it. Well done. A definite favorite.
I so enjoy reading your stories. Thank you for writing. Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination.
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