great start. Can't wait to read more!!
I like this very much. BIG potential, nicely written and very reasonable.
Oh, I am looking forward to the next chapter! I'm intrigued by the changes you've made to the beginning of Prisoner of Azkaban, and I really like the flow of the story. It's nicely paced, and it definitely kept my interest.
Snape's dismissal of the Knight Bus was SO in character for him! *grin* And thanks for writing Harry so that he sounds like recently turned 13 year old. It's quite refreshing to see him behave his age, and to "hear" him talk like a child of that age really would.
This is definitely going to be a story for which I will keep watching for updates.
Well done!
This story is so intriguing! I LOVE that it is set during POA. That was my favorite book and film! I also love how you are characterizing everyone so far. Can't wait to see what you do with Lupin. I'm also glad this story won't feature CP..although I'm not against it, I think 13 is too old to be using that form of discipline. I find that taking away privileges/a kid's favorite thing/talking to them is a better way to get through to them at that age.
This is off to an amazing start.So many wonderful details. You have real talent and I'm looking forward to more of this very much.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Oct 2012 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: amariposa (Anonymous)
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Brilliant so far! I don't know what it is (especially after only one chapter), but something seems to set this fic apart from many of the others in this genre. Hmmm...I do know I just seem to love your version of Snape so far (and Harry, of course). :)
I don't know whether to be extremely happy I came across this at the very beginning or terribly sad it's not complete already lol.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Oct 2012 2:29 am
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| Reviewer: Con Moto (Anonymous)
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That was really good, I can't wait to see what happens next! And poor Snape kept sneezing. I hope he gets better soon!
Oh, nice beginning. I can't wait to read more.
It sounds intriguing too. I like a younger Harry, and POA is my favourite HP book too.
Well, I so looking forward to see what you do with this story. Either way, I know that this story will be great, because you're a talented author.
That's a great start! Good job and I cannot wait to read more. I'm glad that Snape figured out that Harry had done ACCIDENTAL magic instead of actually trying to inflate Marge. If Snape had not, it would have likely created even more "drama."
I can't wait to read more! I hope this will end up becoming an adoption fic :) I've had lots of fun reading this chapter. Please update again soon!
Love it can't wait for more. Update soon
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