Yay! I love surprises lol.
Things are sure to get complicated the closer Sirius gets to trying to get custody of Harry. On the positive side of things, the defense lessons are going well :).
| Title: Chapter 14
| 26 Jan 2013 4:09 am
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| Reviewer: Paccia (Anonymous)
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"Nice to meet you, John Snape"
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Oh no! I hope that Snape doesn't get caught!
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
This chapter was one of the best. Their relationship is wonderfully described.
I am really curious, what Snape´s plan will be. Thank you for updating so often. The story is nicely long by now, and many author start slowing down after 100000 words. I am glad you write right on!
"Because it tastes fouler." :P
This has been yet another brilliant chapter. Truly, I fear I've gotten repetitive in my feedback. My theory is that every chapter just has so much to love that my thoughts crossfire and fritz out leaving me sounding vaguely like a broken record.
... I suppose that's just my newest way of saying I absolutely friggin' adore this fic.
"I must be bad for your blood pressure." That was an awesome line! It made me smile and think, so true!
I love that Sev corrects Harry's eyes in this story. I could see Sev doing that to keep his kid safe.
So will Harry's plan against Sirius' plots to get custody work or is Sirius too blind to get the idea?
what a wonderful chapter. great observation how Snape noticed the Nagini damaged grass!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 21 Jan 2013 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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I really like your story. The way Severus oszillates between keeping his best from Harry and caring for him in possibly the only way a boy with Harry's history of neglect and abuse could stomach is very much in character for both of them, in my opinion. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 21 Jan 2013 12:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great one-liner...'Stride with purpose'
Gotta love it!!!!
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