This chapter is very and very interesting,
excellent writing .
I really enjoyed this very much! Great job!
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
Not sure whats going on with Voldemort, although no doubt it will become clear as the story progresses. Its nice to see Harry able to sneak himself water and food - I can never believe stories where he doesn't even manage to grab a piece of bacon despite cooking it all.One thing - he was locked up till Wednesday when he would belet out to carry all Dudley's shopping, but when Weds came he was left alone to do housework. Nice start though.
| Title: Prologue
| 13 Nov 2012 1:44 am
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| Reviewer: M4073 (Anonymous)
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Aww, poor Harry! Interesting development tho
this may sound odd but...you description of Voldemort was, dare I say, HOT!!!!
I so hope Harry gets his revenge on his worthless so call relatives muhahahaha
Poor, poor Harry. Good start to a story. I love the details and how we get to know this version of Harry intimately. We get to really learn about his character and what made him who he is.
Some of the chapter I felt to be a little bit dragging, almost too much filler of Harry's Muggle life, and a rewrite of the first book. But I DID enjoy reading and learning what this Harry's personality is like, and how he sees and reacts to everything. It's interesting that he is able to use his magic sometimes, and not others. I wonder how and why this Harry is different from the book Harry - did the return of a younger Voldemort this summer somehow affect Harry's abilities to make him more equipped to survive?
I find myself wishing that Harry's Muggle life were a little bit shorter. I wanted to get into the action and drama of the Wizarding world.
I loved the ending, how Harry was able to feel secure now that he had a light whenever he needed it. :)
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