Fabulous chapter, I wonder if it was Dumbledore at the wand shop. Excellent writing.
Hey, I'm not sure what's going on but now chapter 4 is isn't even listed in the table of content.
Author's Response: had it confirmed it had to be moderated should now be visable - sorry again :(
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 19 Nov 2012 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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One step forward, one step back.
Now the chapter doesn't show up on the summary bit (the little box with all the story info and whatnot) or the chapter listings when you click on the title; but at the bottom of chapter three the next button *does* lead to Ch. 4.
Which now has the word "by" *and* "to be continued . . . " on it.
It may just be a time thing, but it looks to be roughly half an hour after Lady Destiny posted the same problem.
Author's Response: has been moderated should now be visable - sorry again :(
Hey, just letting you know that chapter 4 is not accessible to readers anymore. I only get a blank screen with the word by on it. You should try re- posting that chapter.
Author's Response: I have fully deleted and reposted rather than just editing (which I tried before) sorry for the problems - I could see it ok so hadn't realised
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 18 Nov 2012 6:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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For some reason when I try to read the next chapter I get exactly one word:
"by"
centred in the middle of the chapter space.
Considering that's about 8000 words less than what I'm told is the chapter length, the website's glitched out.
I do enjoy this story though, so I hope it gets sorted soon as I'd like to see the next chatper.
Author's Response: Hi - sorry about the problems. Have now deleted and reposted the chapter.
I look forward to reading more of this wonderful story!!
| Title: Diagon Alley
| 15 Nov 2012 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love your style of writing it is very easy to read and although detailed does not drag the story down. Thank you so much for such a well put together tale.
I hope that you continue the story soon. I would love to read what happens next!
This story is great so far please continue this because I would really like to see how you run with the Harry Snape dynamic .
Gosh, that was a marathon, but in a good way - I like long chapters, although you could easily have split that into 2 good length ones. There were so many good bits, where do I start? Good goblins! The wand, the book titles, the kneazle and Hedwig! I liked how you introduced Severus, and love all the detail you're weaving into the story. Hope there's lots more to come.
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