Excellent chapter, interesting change in some of the characters.
| Title: The Express and Sorting
| 26 Mar 2013 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: kspence (Signed)
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Once again, another excellent chapter.
Fabulous chapter, I wonder if it was Dumbledore at the wand shop. Excellent writing.
Absolutely superb chapter, I love your take on things, so believable and well written. Chapter lengths are perfect.
This chapter is very and very interesting,
excellent writing .
| Title: First Day
| 25 Mar 2013 4:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying your story. Like the mystery you have woven into the story. It makes it so much more interesting! Looking forward to reading more. Hope you are feeling better and can update soon.
| Title: First Day
| 25 Mar 2013 2:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Poor Sev and Harry. i suspect that Dumbles is the cause of all the misery. Cannot wait to see what happens with everyone!
Love it looking forward to more
| Title: The Express and Sorting
| 02 Jan 2013 1:50 am
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| Reviewer: quelyn (Signed)
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Loving the story at this point.
My only annoyance is in the description of the Hufflepuff common room.
Lush pot plants?
I think you meant lush potted plants.
| Title: The Express and Sorting
| 26 Nov 2012 3:44 am
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| Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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I love the story thus far! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
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