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Reviews For HP one-shots AU
Title: Severus Cries 09 Dec 2012 3:55 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Much improved but still a few errors that can definitely be changed. But another cute one shot!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I try my best to make my words and stories powerful; yet sweet and sad, and still be on the cute side. I like it when i read my work and i can't help but cry because i am moved. I wrote like that because thats what i look for in a story. But i have lighter stories for laughs as well.
Title: Sun Rise 09 Dec 2012 3:53 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This was cute but there were way too many grammatical mistakes in here that got in the way of the text. Just take a few minutes to proofread before posting something or get a Beta- reader.

    Author's Response: I've gotten a paper grader thing now to check for big grammatical mistakes but how do i get a beta-reader and what is a beta-reader?

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