Great fic! I really like how you wrote both Harry and Snape. Also I was really intrigued to read a story set in the muggle world, as a lot of fics seem to happen at Hogwarts (no problems with that of course, i just see so much potential in having wizards in a muggle setting):)
Amazing!!
I love it!
Although I would greatly appreciate it if there was much more, like the conversation with Dumbledore and what happens to Harry!
| Title: Breaking Point, by Littleforest
| 21 Sep 2013 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Anonymous)
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No ending? It just stopped! Really??? Why did the jerk take Harry with him? Guess Snapey isn't as smart as I thought he was. Had potential, till it just stopped!
| Title: Breaking Point, by Littleforest
| 16 Jan 2013 5:51 am
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| Reviewer: x (Anonymous)
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very good story! excellent writing and character depth. please keep writing :)
I fell in love with this story. It describes the depression that harry must have felt throughout the books and the concern we all wish snape had shown
| Title: Breaking Point, by Littleforest
| 21 Dec 2012 3:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great story told With sympathy but showing the awfulness of drink.
Very well written! Your characterizations of Harry and Snape are perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :)
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