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Title: Problems 23 Oct 2022 3:48 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I can’t believe that Dumbledore would be so irresponsible as to test a potion on his two most valuable players in the war. Unless, of course, he planned for this all along!
Title: Problems 14 May 2014 10:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Problems 09 Jan 2013 2:53 am
Reviewer: spencefa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I always like when Snape takes care of Harry, but I think he should do it at his correct age, he still needs to be friends with Ron and Hermione
Title: Problems 06 Jan 2013 4:01 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, I liked this chapter! I would definitely like to see Harry aeaged to 4 or 5 years old. I think I mentioned my reasons why in my last review.
    Dumbledore could not intervene because he is not old enough to enter Hogwarts. Plus, Severus could get guardianship of Harry by adopting him. Also, it would be better if Harry was younger so Severus can deal with his uncle and aunt's abuse as it's easier to deal with kids that are younger as they are more likely to get over it. Not only that
Title: Problems 03 Jan 2013 7:59 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    The potion did more then make Harry younger but made him Sev's too? Or maybe their connection via their souls are shown in their bodies? Please don't let Albus divide them or attempt to re-age Harry.

    Maybe Sev and his cub should make a run for it or Sev adopt Harry as soon as they transform. Or before?
Title: Problems 31 Dec 2012 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this chapter! Thank you! :) More please??

    Hugs and Love and Happy New Year!
    Vanime
Title: Problems 29 Dec 2012 9:10 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely chapter. If Severus was able to change himself could he take Harry, aged 4, away from Hogwarts and change him and look after him or leave him in his cub form until he has matured.
Title: Problems 27 Dec 2012 6:22 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love the story and I found myself emmersed in the plot.. There isn't many stories like this and I look forward to reading more.. I would love if Harry returned as a younger Harry like Viridian is acting :D.... But that's just me... Please continue because I'm dying to read more :P
Title: Problems 26 Dec 2012 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Holidays! I loved this chapter!

    I do have a solution to the problem where Harry retransforms. I think he ought to transform to a younger age, around four or five as you mentioned. In that case, Dumbledore could not intervene because he is not old enough to enter Hogwarts. Plus, Severus could get guardianship of Harry by adopting him. Also, it would be better if Harry was younger so Severus can deal with his uncle and aunt's abuse as it's easier to deal with kids that are younger.

    Please update again soon, I look forward to reading more!
Title: Problems 26 Dec 2012 8:17 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmm I can see the problem but if he is transformed back as the 4 or 5 year old Severus could raise him still as his cub and provide him a better life. But, then again that would cause problems for th wizarding world. They need Harry well at least they planned to use him. I don't know what but I think you should hmmmm...Perhaps keep Harry in his 4-5 year old body but get memories back perhaps...I don't know thats a toughy

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