| Title: Chapter 9: Dementors At Hogwarts?!
| 22 Feb 2013 8:15 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Wow, a great chapter. I am so glad Severus finally found out about Saturn's hand. It just goes to show that the Dursleys destroyed his self esteem, I am sure with Sev, Lucius, Draco and Luna, he will begin to value himself. Love the story.
| Title: Chapter 9: Dementors At Hogwarts?!
| 22 Feb 2013 5:53 am
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| Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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You really understood the agony Severus went through discovering the injuries to his son. Beautifully done.
| Title: Chapter 9: Dementors At Hogwarts?!
| 22 Feb 2013 4:33 am
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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I like the story, but honestly never review because I don't want my criticisms to appear as flames or anything like that. However, the malapropisms are so thick it is often difficult to decipher your intended meaning--sometimes you directly contradict yourself with your word choices to the point where one just has to guess which extreme you meant in your writing.
Again, this story is an interesting twist on things that I like reading, so please take my comments constructively.
| Title: Chapter 9: Dementors At Hogwarts?!
| 22 Feb 2013 4:04 am
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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Saturn Saturn Saturn what did I tell you last chapter in my review. You should tell your father or you are going to be in deep trouble. Did you listen NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you didn't. Now you have to face your fathers and possibly your brothers wrath because you didn't think that both of your fathers power could solve anything remember your not alone. Stupid stupid boy. Nearly suffered from blood poisoning and the pain may have been enough in your eyes but oh you don't know whats coming when you have a mad parent agianst you. Listen to me next time. (sigh)
I forgot to review last chapter, but in all honesty I didn't have much to say about the chapter.
I am REALLY looking forward to Lucius's reaction please don't leave that in the dark for too long. This chapter was abit confusing at times but I got the gists of it and I'll probably go back an reread it sometimes soon.
I love Luna of course, and I hope Draco finds out as well that Umbridge dared to torture his little brother. All in all good chapter and I can't wait until the next on.
Poor Saturn! Can't wait to see his parents' reactions!
| Title: Chapter 8: The Toad's Punishment
| 15 Feb 2013 7:12 am
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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The first thing I did was growl just at the title of the chapter.
I was yelling at the screen saying Saturn keep your mouth shut but noooooo you had to piss her off more.
Saturn is kinda absent minded and forgetful when he is around nature. The bunnies sounded really cute I want one and probably would have gotten distracted too :P
He really needs to tell his father what the toad has been doing. He shouldnm't keep it to himself. He will just get into more trouble later for not telling sooner.
Please, please write more!
| Title: Chapter 7: A Dreaded Meeting With the Headmaster
| 12 Feb 2013 4:07 am
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| Reviewer: Godiva9 (Signed)
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Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, I was so happy to see someone take this challenge and you have done it very well! I can't wait to see more Sev/Luc/Saturn/Draco interaction! I hope that Saturn will start standing up for himself and show his power (the thorn and Rose analogy was great) Keep up the good work!
| Title: Chapter 7: A Dreaded Meeting With the Headmaster
| 10 Feb 2013 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: Zaiferz (Signed)
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hoooo snap!
this is amazing!!!!!!!!
i cant wait for thursday!!! im so hooked on this, its not funny...
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