Another wonderful update!
So, with Luna as his "friend" ( and apparently more) will he at least be able to befriend Nev again? That is, if Draco doesn't cause more issues!
Thanks!
V.
| Title: Chapter 6: A Sorting at Hogwarts
| 01 Feb 2013 5:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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A Ravenclaw actually makes a lot of sense. I was actually thinking Huffle-Puff myself.
I'm really enjoying this story. Now to see how Dumbles will handle all of this.
| Title: Chapter 6: A Sorting at Hogwarts
| 01 Feb 2013 7:13 am
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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Ravenclaw huh I was kinda hoping for Slytherin but I kinda agree with what the hat said so I like the choice.
Lets just hope the Umbitch (hem-hem Sorry) Umbridge doesn't take anything out on Saturn for being and Elf. When I saw the Hem-Hem I wanted to rip my hair out and scream I hate that women/toad.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
More Sev and Saturn? Please?
| Title: Chapter 2: An Unusual Cry for Help
| 31 Jan 2013 12:01 pm
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| Reviewer: L (Anonymous)
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This is a lovely story so far. You writing style is very beautiful, poetic and interesting, and I can't wait to see what happens. I do recommend you review your use of commas in dialogue (include a comma between what a person is saying and their name - e.g. "will you be ready to talk to him, Severus?"). However, your story is fantastic and very well written!
| Title: Chapter 5: Diagon Alley & Unexpected Surprises
| 27 Jan 2013 3:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed)
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Aww, Harry' s first crush. How sweet :)
Please update again soon, I can't wait to read more!
| Title: Chapter 5: Diagon Alley & Unexpected Surprises
| 25 Jan 2013 7:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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So much is new and Saturn has such a short time to make adjustments to everything.
I like the job you are doing with the relationships, i.e. Severus taking time from his potions to talk to him and hug him.
It is going to be a difficult adjustment and there have been some horrible betrayals to overcome. Dumbles better have a good story for this, including the murder of the young witch.
Absolutely wicked chapter! Luna was great. I hope we get to see more of Saturn with his parents in the future. Particularly with Sev. I look forward to seeing what Saturn inherited from the wizard!
| Title: Chapter 5: Diagon Alley & Unexpected Surprises
| 25 Jan 2013 5:52 am
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| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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I believe I have said this before, but I will say it again-you have a gift for painting beautiful images with your words. From the early morning in the book stacks to the rain - amazing. I shall be interested in how the relationship between Draco and Saturn matures. It's all to new and kind and sweet at the moment (although I would expect nothing less!) I am sure there will be some "welcome to the real world" types of bumps along the way.
And you have LUNA!! I love Luna and look forward to more of her presence in the future!
Thanks for the update.
V.
| Title: Chapter 5: Diagon Alley & Unexpected Surprises
| 25 Jan 2013 5:26 am
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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I was looking for updates and I was hoping your was updated and I looked and bam there it was and putting a smile on my face.
Dumbledore better not mess things up if he does I will be really mad at him (not your writing its just part of the story....and he is rather good at it...unfortunatly)
Saturns wand sounds lovely and the core is a really cool idea.
I love his reaction to nature and it was sad when the tree was hit and he felt it.
My question from last chapter about Draco being an elf or not was answered thank you.
I LOVE LUNA and his reaction to her priceless. I loved how she always knows people and who they are or their bloodline with just a glance.
I see a future romance in the making?
Again Awsome chapter and I am so ready for another chapter and wait with excitment.
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