| Title: Chapter 2: An Unusual Cry for Help
| 09 Jan 2013 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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Very well written. I love the details in the descriptions of the people or scene. I am very interested to see how this turns out. I look forward to your next update!
| Title: Chapter 2: An Unusual Cry for Help
| 05 Jan 2013 2:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
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I really thought Severus would be with him when he woke up, not sure of his reaction without him there. Looking forward to next Thursday.
| Title: Chapter 2: An Unusual Cry for Help
| 05 Jan 2013 12:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fringie7 (Anonymous)
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LOVE this story. Keep writing!
Will Sev get to see his baby boy soon?
I love it so far! I can't wait until Harry, or Saturn wakes up. I think it's safe to say that he will have a relatively positive reaction towards both of his parents as long as they show him lots of love and affection which , was lacking in his previous life.
Can't wait to read more!
Is Harry only sick because of what his relatives did, or is part of it his magic readjusting to who he really is, without the blood spell? What kind of creature is lucius? Severus said Harry looked like he was on the edge of an Ancient Wood Elf inheritance, so is that what Lucius is, or did he just say that because Harry was so small and skinny? Also, is Severus part creature too? Why would the Headmaster come looking for Severus & Lucius? He wouldn't have any reason to suspect they know about what happened, right? Sorry for all the questions, but I really like this story so far, and am intrigued as to how this will all play out.
| Title: Chapter 2: An Unusual Cry for Help
| 04 Jan 2013 7:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating. Like Lucius in this and of course Severus. I hope are us stays in the story
| Title: Chapter 2: An Unusual Cry for Help
| 04 Jan 2013 5:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 2: An Unusual Cry for Help
| 04 Jan 2013 4:07 pm
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| Reviewer: mirice24 (Signed)
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Thanks for the new chapter. I love it.
This is a very interesting story.
I see how you are making Narcissa a friend to both Lucius and Severus and they probably love each as sister and brother.
However, that can't be a very satisfying situation for Narcissa. Has she ever loved another man or woman and if she ever did, would Lucius be alright with her having a lover
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I have nothing against m/m or m/preg - I just think that Narcissa cannot really be happy as just a mother. Since the marriage for was the purpose of having a child and that child is Draco and there are no other children, then I am assuming that sex between Lucius and Narcissa is non existant.
As Narcissa is a young woman, this is rather unfair to her as Lucius and Severua are still lovers.
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