Title: Everything and Nothing
| 18 Jan 2013 7:25 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Love the start! So intriguing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Everything and Nothing
| 16 Jan 2013 5:56 am
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Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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What an intriguing beginning! I am excited to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I am glad you are intrigued!
Title: Everything and Nothing
| 14 Jan 2013 5:27 am
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Reviewer: anon (Anonymous)
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Really liked it! Very well written and interesting. Please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Continue, I shall. :)
Definitely interesting!!!
Author's Response: Glad you think so!
So the aftereffects from the Cruciatus Severus is suffering is similar to that of a stroke's? Interesting, I felt this was well written and I look forward to the rest!
Author's Response: Well spotted! Yes, I actually read up on stroke victims and based Severus' troubles on that, to some degree. I tried to educate myself as much as I could on the matter so I don't absolutely butcher the concept. I have always thought that the cruciatus could affect someone in similar ways as a storke. I am glad you thought this chapter was well written, and thank you for the review!
This is such a cool idea, Whitetail! Reaaaally looking forward to reading more of this!
Author's Response: I am pleased you like it! Thank you for the feedback!
Title: Everything and Nothing
| 12 Jan 2013 10:01 pm
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Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Judging by the first chapter you have another great story here. It's going to be really interesting to see how both Snape and Harry deal with having a body that won't do what their brain expects.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks rosina! I kind of wanted to draw some parallels between Harry and Snape, which was why I went for this concept. I hope you continue to find their situation interesting!
Title: Everything and Nothing
| 12 Jan 2013 9:00 pm
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Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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I definitely want more, as this was a very good first chapter. Kudos
Author's Response: And more you shall have. ;) Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Everything and Nothing
| 12 Jan 2013 8:31 pm
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Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous)
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Yeah, I like it so far :) You have good ideas :))
Author's Response: Thanks Kate! Glad it is to your liking. :)
This is good, I like the take that Harry still has his older mind.
Author's Response: I have yet to try doing as tory where Harry is deaged with his older mind, so I am glad you like that. Cheers!
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