The atmosphere is set nicely now, and you made Severus and Harry's feelings of frustration/despondency real. While both seem willing to try and get along with the other, I'm sure it won't go entirely smoothly. Can't wait for next week!
Author's Response: Quite right in your assumption, rosina. It will be a bit of a challenge, for sure! I am glad you liked the setting, and the descriptions of Harry's and Severus' frustrations. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review cara-tanaka! I cannot wait to post more either.
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