Love it looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Personally I'd like to see Snape get guardianship of both of them, as I think they need each other.
Author's Response: Hmm, that would be fun, wouldn't it be? Thank you for the review!
| Title: The Arrival
| 18 Mar 2013 4:08 pm
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| Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous)
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I love this story! You characterize everybody so well. I loved how Harry managed to get Snape to colour with him, and the way you described Snape's coloring!
Author's Response: Great to hear from you! I am so glad you are enjoying the descriptions and characterizations. ;)
I had to smile at Harry telling Snape off for swearing, and at the whole colouring scene. Much more fun for Snape than the stupid, annoying sewing cards! You did a good job on showing how numb Hermione is - even an undoubtedly sweet young Harry couldn't raise much interest.
Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the colouring scene and Harry telling Severus off. Great to hear you thought that my portrayal of Hermione's emotional state good. Kind of a combonation of shock and depression. Thanks so much for your review!
| Title: The Arrival
| 15 Mar 2013 8:25 pm
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| Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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I would LOVE to have a moving coloring book! How cool would that be!!!
Nicely written - I'm so sad about Hermione :(
Author's Response: Extremely cool, indeed. I too would jump at the chance for a colouring book like that! I am glad you enjoyed the writing!
| Title: The Arrival
| 15 Mar 2013 5:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous)
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D'awwwwwww Sevvy and harry coloring together SOOOO cute! I like how harry lied for sevvy. Hermione seems so sad i hope she cheers up. I wonder what these will do to Sevvy and harry's new budding friendship. And what is the letter all about?
Author's Response: Nice to hear your thoughts. As for the letter, just an ordinary 'hello' kind of letter. The text won't be revealed. The letter from Ron was merely an indication that Mrs. Weasley had been there to tuck Harry in. Thanks for reviewing!
I really enjoyed this chapter - the bit of lightheartedness at the beginning, with Severus and Harry coloring together, blended well with the sadder portion with Hermione's arrival. Nicely done.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked the combination of light and dark in this chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Aw, poor Hermione and Harry. Poor Snape too. I hope these three can help each other to cope and heal.
Great chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, they sure are going through a rough time. Well, they definitely have enough in common to really step into eachother's shoes and lend a hand, that is for sure. Thanks so much for reviewing!
:) that was a cute part with Sev and poro Herm. I hope everyone gets better soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
And a new prisoner arrives. Poor Hermione sounds like a prisoner of grief at the moment. Bell Point should be a good refuge for her, too. She can talk with Harry or Snape if she feels like it or be alone. The coloring scene was nice. No wonder Harry was almost sorted into Slytherin - he managed to convince Snape to use coloring as a more enjoyable therapy.
Author's Response: Very well put, bridgeportfox. Yes, Hermione is very much a prisoner of grief. I am glad that you liked Harry's little Slytherin moment! Thanks so much for reviewing!
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