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Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 15 Feb 2013 6:04 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you write more when you get a chance. Rough or not some brill plot!

    Author's Response: Oh, I have plenty more written. It just isn't edited yet! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 15 Feb 2013 4:43 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Rough only in the sense that what they're going through is rough. :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 15 Feb 2013 4:06 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Snape and poor Harry. I hope that they both get a break soon. They have so much in common and could be a good support for each other. Hope that they learn to lean on each other.

    Great job!! Can't wait till the next chapter. Happy Valentine's Day too, and good luck with your midterms.

    Author's Response: It is great to hear you are enjoying it! Thank you for the review and well wishes! :)
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 14 Feb 2013 9:51 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I was really crying for both of them. This chapter tore me up. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review cara-tanaka! I am glad that this chapter had an emotional effect. Hope it didn't tear you up too bad! ;)
Title: The Subtle Art of Shaving 14 Feb 2013 9:51 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I was really crying for both of them. This chapter tore me up. Looking forward to more.
Title: Terror in the Night 13 Feb 2013 11:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I doubt with the problems Severus is having that he will continue to be. Supportive. Thank you a lovely chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, pretty difficult to be supportive when you're going through a rough time, so definitely a logical assumption.
Title: Terror in the Night 11 Feb 2013 12:06 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi there, your new chap really made my evening! I loved every bit of it, even the shouting between the two because it made this even better and more realistic considering how their relationship started out.
    The "I can't do buttons either." made me crack up with laugther. That was so cute!! (As was Harry giving Snape a shell. )
    Oh, and the night scene! What brilliant ideas, first the accident then that boggart, absolutely brilliant! Thank you so much for writing this and for making Snape care. By the way, yes, I hope there will be some appearance of Molly, but I can never say no to Harry-Snape interaction to the max, that's just what I luv. ;)
    Loved it, your Melfis.

    Author's Response: Haha, well, your review made my evening! I am glad you think Harry was rather cute, and that you enjoyed the events during the night. Thanks so very much for leaving me some feedback! It's always nice to know what people think of the story.
Title: Terror in the Night 09 Feb 2013 6:03 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter and no, I don't think at all that it's going too fast. I think Snape has been perfectly Snape and even though we don't always believe it, he IS human, and humans are created with an innate desire to love and protect small children. Being Snape, he'd ignore it and fight it long and hard, but it would still be there. I think you're going at a perfect pace.

    Author's Response:

    I am so glad you feel it isn't going too fast. I have debated time and time again with myself whether or not the pace is off, so thank you so much for the feedback!

Title: Terror in the Night 08 Feb 2013 9:02 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I do like how you are writing Snape here. There's still a hint of the greasy git, but his patience with Harry is lovely. Not sure if he's taken Dumbledore's advice to heart, or if he just hasn't got the energy to verbally attack without provocation. No doubt with Molly gone the friction between the two will increase,and their frustrations will cause problems, but it would be nice to see them get along for a little longer.

    Author's Response:

    Hey rosina! Glad you are liking it. That is the question ... has Snape actually taken Dumbledore's advice?  I can't promise they are always going to get along, but there will be moments like this one where they do. Thanks so much for the  review!

Title: Terror in the Night 08 Feb 2013 5:26 am
Reviewer: Manfredd (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter! I'll miss Molly, but I don't think an agreeable Snape will last! :p

    Author's Response: It is wonderful to know that you are enjoying the story. That is definitely an educated guess of how Snape will react. He has got quite a temper sometimes, for sure! Thanks for dropping a line. :)

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