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Title: An Understanding 01 Feb 2013 3:45 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the way Harry has some childish traits even though he still has his teenage mind. Hopefully he will allow himself to enjoy the childhood he didn't have. Poor Snape. His dignity was important to him and he seems to have lost that, too. He and Harry have a lot of common ground here. The two of them finding it should be a good story.

    Author's Response: Nice to hear that Harry's indecision over his age is appreciated! He's been fun to write. They do have common ground, for sure, and I hope you enjoy the way they find it. Thanks for the review!
Title: An Understanding 01 Feb 2013 3:04 am
Reviewer: tess4aria (Signed) [Report This]
    Truly fantastic chapter. Everyone's individual struggles and their interactions with one another feel so organic, and you're developing the plot in a way that is truly gripping, and not the least bit overdone. Can't wait to read more!!

    Author's Response: I am glad that it seems natural. It's been a bit of a struggle from time to time, so it is nice to know that it flows nicely. Thanks so much for the review!
Title: An Understanding 01 Feb 2013 1:36 am
Reviewer: spinsun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just perfect! I can badly wait for the next one XD

    Author's Response: Glad you are liking it! Thanks for the review.
Title: An Understanding 31 Jan 2013 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    poor severus. It is so frustrating when you use to be able to do things for yourself and now you no longer can. Its also hard for a person who was 100% independent to become 40-50% dependent to overcome that and get use to people helping.

    I can see in future chapters when Mrs. Weasley is not that and Harry is the one that helps out. Something is going to happen and Harry will help or save Severus and he will see Harry in a new light in away.

    Good chapter keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Yes, it is a challenging situation. Thanks for the review!
Title: An Understanding 31 Jan 2013 10:25 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more. Am I going to be in tears next chapter?

    Author's Response: Hmm ... I am not sure whether or not you'll be in tears next chapter. It is sad in some ways, but I do not think you will be bawling your eyes out, exactly. I guess you'll see. ;) Thanks for the review cara-tanaka!
Title: Bell Point 31 Jan 2013 2:30 pm
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying your story and looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your review, Mary! Looks like you didn't have long to wait for the next chapter, because today is my update day! Hope you like it. :)

     

Title: Bell Point 27 Jan 2013 5:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Bell Point especially reading about it in winter. Really looking forward to their interaction but we needed these chapters, thank you

    Author's Response: I know I sure loved writing about the beach in the dead of winter! Brrr! Glad you liked it Fmh, and thank you for reviewing!
Title: Bell Point 26 Jan 2013 3:42 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus. His pride is getting one blow after another.

    Author's Response: Yeah. Things have been going rather badly for him. Thanks for dropping a line.
Title: Bell Point 26 Jan 2013 12:56 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad I gave your story a try. I was a little leary at first, and put it off for a while. I was afraid that a story in which our heroes were permanantly disabled would be too sad, too hard to bear. I'm glad that I read these first three chapters, though, because they're quite good. I like the characterizations and the possibilities. I still hope they'll both return to full health, but I'm coming along for the ride no matter the future. It's too well written and contains too many possibilities to miss.

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for giving it a whirl! I am very glad that you are enjoying the story. I am trying my best to keep it from getting too morose, and there will be a few funny parts to come to add a little contrast. I really appreciate the review  and kind comments!
Title: Bell Point 25 Jan 2013 11:01 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait until next chapter where they get some interaction. I find myself really hurting for Sev, poor thing. Not to leave Harry out, poor him as well lol

    I don't have much to say this chapter, but next time I will. Good update, you were right it was setting the scene.

    Author's Response: Heck, I feel bad for Severus and I'm writing him. I am glad you enjoyed the update. Thank you for your feedback!

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