I'm very tired, so I'm sorry this is not a more clever review, but I'm glad that you've updated and I love the way that you're building up to the crux of the story. Well done.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Pandora! Sorry to hear you're tired. I'm in the same boat, so I totally get the lack of cleverness at the moment I am glad that you are enjoying the build-up, and I always appreciate a review, bursting with wisdom or not. Hope you catch a few Zs! ;) Cheers.
I love the beach so reading this chapter was fun. At least Severus will be making an effort with Harry since he is so young and Harry promised to try to get along with Severus. Now that the stage is set, I'm looking forward to the two of them finally interacting.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment! I am glad you enjoyed the beach scene! I rather liked it myself, so it is nice to know that someone shares the same opinion. :)
Wooo, SO excited for the next chapter :D I'm really interested to see how Harry's going to act... in the other deaging fics that I've read, Harry hasn't really retained his teenage mind and memories. Also, the fact that he'll still partially have the feelings of a child will make it interesting! Great chapter :)
Author's Response: I have enjoyed writing Harry in his de-aged form, and there certainly will be a battle between his teenaged side and childish side, so I hope that you enjoy it! Thank you so much for your review. :)
The atmosphere is set nicely now, and you made Severus and Harry's feelings of frustration/despondency real. While both seem willing to try and get along with the other, I'm sure it won't go entirely smoothly. Can't wait for next week!
Author's Response: Quite right in your assumption, rosina. It will be a bit of a challenge, for sure! I am glad you liked the setting, and the descriptions of Harry's and Severus' frustrations. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review cara-tanaka! I cannot wait to post more either.
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| 22 Jan 2013 8:49 pm
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I loved this chapter, it was quieter and set up so much for the future. I loved the scene of Harry sleeping in Hagrids' lap! I would love a picture of that if any clever people could do it. thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Heck, I'd love a picture of that too. I would draw one, but I am absolutely frightful at drawing people! Cheers!
| Title: Everything and Nothing
| 22 Jan 2013 12:34 am
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Wow avert strong start to the story with lots of angst thank you
Author's Response: You are very welcome. Thank you for the refview Fmh!
I didn't find the chapter too mundane. I enjoyed comparing how similar both Harry and Snape's situations are. Yet the solution for them is opposite. Snape needs to control his anger and frustration while Harry has to vent his emotions. It will be interesting to see how they cope together.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the comparison between Harry and Snape. I have tried to give them common ground throughout the course of the story, as well as highlight their differences. Thanks so much for the review and insight, bridgeportfox!
Nice interlude for Harry with Hagrid. I like how his four year old self takes over from the older version when he gets annoyed. Wonder which will prevail when he and Snape meet up.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes indeed, how will Harry act when he and Snape are together?
I love this story so much! I can't wait to see what happens to poor Harry and Severus when they are are stuck together! Thank you!
Author's Response: And thank you for reviewing! I am very happy that you are enjoying this story. A writer loves nothing more than to know that their work has been read and thought over. Cheers!
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