This hit hard, but I used to wish that someone would pull me aside and show me that I wasn't alone like Sev showed Harry.
Anyways, good one shot, I don't usually read stories that are written in this POV
Author's Response: I know what you mean. So did I. No one did. Oh well. At least Harry has someone in this story. :) And thank you.
Love it, good job! Nicely done in the second person. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I usually don't write in the second person at all, I'm still surprised this worked as well as it did. XD
Wow, this is so good! Your characterzation, and the way you made me feel Harry's complete lack of self-concern and deep despair. Very well written! Thank you so much for shairing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
| Title: Reflection
| 21 Jan 2013 2:02 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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sequil?
Author's Response: Probably not doing a sequel, unfortunately. But I'll consider it. :3 If I do, I doubt it will be written in second person POV.
Deep
Author's Response: Thank you.
I quite enjoyed that - you managed to pack a fair bit into a short fic, and while I'd assumed that Challenge would make for awkward reading it didn't at all.
Author's Response: Thank you! XD I hoped it wouldn't be too awkward, I don't usually write in second person, but that Challenge sort of caught my imagination with "okay what could I do," and then that popped into my head.
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