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Title: Chapter 4 22 Jan 2013 9:37 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    My only real nitpick for this chapter apart from it's brevity (blame that on all the writers I've been reading with uber-long chapters :P) is that I'm not entirely certain an eleven year old would have such an advance vocabulary. I suppose a particularly precocious one could.

    Nonetheless, another well done tidbit.

    Author's Response:

    I tend to forget that most eleven-year-olds are not like I was at eleven. -blushes-

    ...They're all precocious now, I've decided, yes. XD Thank you. And I'm not very good at uber-long chapters. :P Yet anyway. There might be some coming up soon. 


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