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Title: Chapter 6 03 Feb 2013 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I am s Rory I'm racing to read this excellent story and haven't stopped to review!
    Love the personalities I've met so far and am looking forward to more Severus Harry interaction.
Title: Chapter 11 02 Feb 2013 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a lot to comment on. Keep up the nice work.
Title: Chapter 11 30 Jan 2013 9:06 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    I am curious about the pranks...
Title: Chapter 11 30 Jan 2013 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    While I usually hate to see Ron being a dick, I have to admit that I like the idea of Harry (in whatever personality he is under) teaming up with the twins to get a little pay back. Kudos on another wonderful update.
Title: Chapter 10 27 Jan 2013 8:19 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    If anything, the twins are probably the most likely candidates for help with pranking Ron. :P It was nice to see a bit of Raven.

    Author's Response: I know, right? XD Of COURSE they'll help. It will take a teeny bit of persuasion, but I mean, really. :P And yes, thank you. :3
Title: Chapter 10 26 Jan 2013 7:55 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting!
    I am curious if there will be chapter where Freak or Leigh is in the front of the mind. Or also if Tom some time make the mistake and call himself "us" in Snapes presence.
    Looking forward to next chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Yes, there will be. They have to be triggered for Freak to come out, though, and Leigh tends to front only when they are in danger (which is how he came out during the fight). But they'll both be out at some point.

    Tom won't make that mistake, no. But others might... o:) 

Title: Chapter 9 26 Jan 2013 8:15 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Jay and Blue vaguely call to mind the prince and Jemmy from a book I had to read (forever ago) in the fifth grade called 'The Whipping Boy.' Most curious that they should be twins... most curious, indeed. I could probably ramble out a good long theory on the idea, but it is much too late for coherence in such a matter.

    Another good tidbit.

    Author's Response: I've read that book. o_o It's quite good. And yes, it is a bit like that, I suppose, isn't it? Poor Blue. I'm very interested in your theory though, if you ever want to ramble on about it, I'd love to know if it's anything close to my thoughts. :') Thank you!
Title: Chapter 9 25 Jan 2013 9:57 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    What a story. Very interesting. I cannot wait for more. I Jave the bad feeling that the attackers were Ron, twins and maybe Jordan.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. XD

     I can at least tell you that the twins wouldn't do that. I don't think Jordan would, either. As for Ron, well... :p Not to give TOO much away, but he is at least *involved*. But whether that actually extends to being one of the actual attackers... 

Title: Chapter 8 23 Jan 2013 11:59 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Jay would be exasperating, when he wasn't providing entertainment. Oddly, I find his pessimism amusing.

    Nice update.

    Author's Response: Jay's kind of awesome, in his own annoying way. XD I know what you mean. I like him, but I feel like I shouldn't. :p 
Title: Chapter 8 23 Jan 2013 11:26 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really interesting so far. I'm not much for these stories usually but I do like psy, so thought i'd try it. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! XD

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