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Title: Chapter 8 23 Jan 2013 10:38 pm
Reviewer: GirlJonas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Bravo. I hope you continue with this.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I certainly plan on continuing with it, yes.
Title: Chapter 8 23 Jan 2013 4:22 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Too short!

    Author's Response: I'm evil that way. :p Although some of the upcoming chapters will be longer...maybe...>:D No, they will. 
Title: Chapter 7 22 Jan 2013 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    It would be so disorienting to keep missing significant portions of the day. Poor Harry. And who is this ganging up on the child? Hmm... I have my suspicions, but I think I shan't say anything and wait to see if I'm right.

    Good chapter.

    Author's Response:

    It really is not fun, no. I'll put it in at some point, but his alters tend to put up screen memories so he doesn't think he just missed all his classes or something. But they tend to miss out on the finer details, like Jay's prank on Ron, so Harry freaks out.

    Well, if you think about it, there are QUITE a few people in Hogwarts who would not be pleased that the Boy Who Lived is in Slytherin...for several reasons. You won't find out for a while anyway, it's not like Harry saw anything.

    Thank you. :3 

Title: Chapter 7 22 Jan 2013 5:24 pm
Reviewer: My_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOVE IT! I am enjoying this story, as it is very different any most of Harry Potter tales! Great details and interesting characters/alters!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! XD
Title: Chapter 6 22 Jan 2013 9:55 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, troublemaker Harry. He's going to get them into plenty of mischief, I suspect.

    Alas, I seem to have reached the ominous "To be continued..." I do hope you continue soon. This story really is a fun read so far. I look forward to reading what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Yes...yes, Jay is. XD He doesn't particularly care about consequences either since any outside ones, well, he can just pass onto another alter. :p

    Well, I've just added Chapter 7. And if I go on how I have been, I'm writing a chapter a day, just about. So at least you shouldn't have to wait too long! Thank you for reviewing all my chapters so far, that was lovely of you. :3 

Title: Chapter 5 22 Jan 2013 9:46 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really rather enjoying the alters you have created for Harry (and Harry himself, of course). Tom may be becoming a favorite, I fear, even if he is The Tom. I can't help myself. He amuses me.

    The image of Harry skipping around like a little girl gave me a good chuckle. As did the thought of him attempting to seduce the professor. :P

    Really, I am finding this whole thing so enjoying. I do not, however, look forward to catching up with you. Waiting just kills me.

    Author's Response: Thank you. If it's any consolation, Tom amuses me, too. I like him. What have I done to myself. And yes, can you imagine? I don't think Severus would react very well to either of those scenarios. :P (Sneak peek hint. At some point, Kitten tries. To no one's surprise, it does not work at all.)
Title: Chapter 4 22 Jan 2013 9:37 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    My only real nitpick for this chapter apart from it's brevity (blame that on all the writers I've been reading with uber-long chapters :P) is that I'm not entirely certain an eleven year old would have such an advance vocabulary. I suppose a particularly precocious one could.

    Nonetheless, another well done tidbit.

    Author's Response:

    I tend to forget that most eleven-year-olds are not like I was at eleven. -blushes-

    ...They're all precocious now, I've decided, yes. XD Thank you. And I'm not very good at uber-long chapters. :P Yet anyway. There might be some coming up soon. 

Title: Chapter 3 22 Jan 2013 9:28 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Tom... Thought that might be you. Intriguing turn of events. Rather promising, I'd say.

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) Oh yes, I like Tom...I really like Tom, which disturbs me considering who he is, but oh well.
Title: Chapter 2 22 Jan 2013 9:21 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Blaise, so far. Granted, we've barely seen him, but his quip to Malfoy was quite witty. I approve.

    Ah, and Severus is going to be Severus, I see. I'd have been disappointed if he wasn't at this juncture, however.

    Nicely done, although a bit brief, perhaps.

    Author's Response:

    I'm evil that way with brief things. XD Thank you. I like Blaise, too. I kind of see him as you know...he can be really acerbic, but he likes Harry, and I think he can tell, too, that something's not quite right with Harry. He just doesn't know what yet. 

    Of course. XD I hate it when Severus turns into a fluffy kitten straight off the bat, it just doesn't seem...like himself at all. 

Title: Chapter 1 22 Jan 2013 9:09 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I rather like the premise for this story. I suppose I have my own fascination with the mind and how things can go awry, really. After reading "Reflection," I thought I'd give one of your other tales a try and this one caught my eye.

    Good start.

    Author's Response: It really is fascinating, isn't it? Granted, I have more of a personal connection with this topic. :p But thank you! :D

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