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Title: Chapter 16 22 May 2013 8:08 pm
Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW - I'm so glad you are continuing this story line - I had forgotten how awesome it was and how much I'm enjoying it!

    Keep it up!
Title: Chapter 15 08 Apr 2013 1:09 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting chapter! I hope Severus finds out Harry's condition soon.
Title: Chapter 15 29 Mar 2013 3:01 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, just making sure: Jay is James right? I can understand Tom being there, but how did an almost carbon copy of James enter into Harry's psyche? Is it his vague memories of his parents? I know, questions, questions, and not a single answer yet. I'm going to have to reread this from the beginning, because I've forgotten who all is with Harry.
Title: Chapter 15 29 Mar 2013 12:50 am
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Their world is canonly barbaric.
Title: Chapter 14 17 Feb 2013 11:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter loved how the others came to Harry's aid. Can we have some Severus an Harry interaction soon?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. :3

     There will be some proper Severus/Harry interaction in the next chapter when I'm done with it...just not had the time to write lately. ^^; 

Title: Chapter 13 10 Feb 2013 9:04 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Clever use of the prank to garner a confession. Well-played. It was lovely to see protective Snape.

    Nicely done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! :3 

    It took ages for me to get to writing this chapter because I couldn't decide what I wanted the prank to be. I wanted it to be more than just something silly...and then that came into my head. XD And it was awesome. I love it when my muse actually cooperates. :p 

Title: Chapter 13 09 Feb 2013 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Emily Redbird (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, really interesting story, and a great idea for a plot!

    Have you read "Broken mind, fractured soul"? I noticed an alter ego reocurring, namely Kitten.

    I do wonder how long it will take for anyone to figure it out.

    Great job, and especially a great job on creating all these different discernable characters:-)

    Emily Redbird

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! XD I have read it (and the sequel lol). I loved it, but I hate the fact that they integrate. That's why in this one, they don't. :p

    It will take a while for anyone to figure it out. Some people are noticing slowly that something's a little odd about Harry, but even then, it's not like DID is commonplace in the muggle OR wizarding worlds, so. XD 

Title: Chapter 13 09 Feb 2013 5:23 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that is interesting. Just some clarity, would Tom have been the first, seeing as you've made it clear that the Horcrux inside Harry has taken on sentient life?
Title: Chapter 13 09 Feb 2013 3:05 am
Reviewer: Sisyphus (Signed) [Report This]
    I've just found this wonderfully interesting and unique story of yours and I'm entirely in its grip! I love the ideas of multiple personalities, and I especially love that 'Tom' is the most reasonable and well-adjust one! What a turn-around! Can't wait to see what's in store for the Harries... :)
Title: Chapter 12 07 Feb 2013 6:47 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was brief, and a definite cliffie. More please?

    Author's Response: Of course! XD Eventually. :p No, in the next day or two, actually. 

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