Title: Chapter 2
| 14 Apr 2018 8:08 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting idea that Severus admired Frank
I like how you've given Severus a heart, even with his contention that: "There was a cold heart behind his cold exterior, whatever Minerva thought." - very nice
a little short but hey Im not complaining you added another chapter :) So that is why he was Neville and Lets see if, like the Grinch, Severus heart might grow 3 sizes this year :P
Author's Response: That predictable, huh? The story is finished (hooray), it just waits to be beta-ed. It is just a serie of one-scene chapters, really. I tried and hopefully succedded not to make Snape overly mushy. Thanks for your review!
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