lol Petunia a cow :P Moo
Neville is such a sweety.
Who is this "they" Neville is talking about? Hmmmmmm (rubs chin in wonder)
wow I wonder who it was that tried to kill Severus. Im glad they are off to Azkaban where they belong.
Im also glad that Harry and Neville are spending more time together. Neville was always more understanding then Ron.
LOL he doesn't like visitors so he pretends to sleep but I am sure he will be thoughtful of them and make a comment on them in front of Neville so he will knows he liked them.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I always liked Neville more than Ron.
I like how Minerva plots. Very sneaky and rather Slytherin-esque.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes, Minerva has her inner Slytherin side :)
Interesting that Neville chose Snape over his uncle. It speaks volumes about how he feels about Uncle Augie.
I feel a little bad for Neville. I think it was good that Harry was there for him.
Nice thickening of the plot with Harry finding out that it wasn't really Neville they went to Hogsmeade with, and finding out about Neville's grandmother.
I like how you've given Severus a heart, even with his contention that: "There was a cold heart behind his cold exterior, whatever Minerva thought." - very nice
Excellent opening scenario. I like Severus' thoughts - the revenge that he plans to set upon Albus once he's performed his task. This is a very enjoyable read.
Harry isn't as bad as you think Snape. Neville is probably better since he is scared of you and Harry is not but you should notice that Harry is a caring and loyal friend/person nothing like his father. (im notsaying that James wasn't but not as much as Harry)
Author's Response: Snape is as prejudiced as Harry is :) Thank you for your support. I don't think this story is very popular.
Well geez I think Harry should have a right to choose who he stays with as well now that he is old enough. Heck he would pick Snape over his relative also.
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