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Reviews For The many animagus of Harry potter
Please make sure that every name starts with a capital letter, like Harry. Ron and Hermione were too busy.... "where" is a place and "were" is a way to be. Harry was taking a break from dating... not form dating. A form is a noun, either a piece of paper of questions that you fill out, or a shape. All the mistakes make this story very difficult to read, which is too bad because it would be a much better story if there weren't so many errors. I do like the inventive animagus forms. |
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