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Title: They are laughing at you not with you. 03 Feb 2013 10:35 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting premise. It was very hard to read the story though, because of all the writing mistakes. Please find a beta to fix your work before you post.

    Please make sure that every name starts with a capital letter, like Harry.

    Ron and Hermione were too busy.... "where" is a place and "were" is a way to be.

    Harry was taking a break from dating... not form dating. A form is a noun, either a piece of paper of questions that you fill out, or a shape.

    All the mistakes make this story very difficult to read, which is too bad because it would be a much better story if there weren't so many errors.

    I do like the inventive animagus forms.

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