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Title: When Life hands you nuts, What do you make? 03 Feb 2013 10:39 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    If you use the past tense it is "It happened so quickly" not "it happen so quickly."

    Ron, Hermione, and he

    were working.... finding their

    "there" is a place, "their" belongs to people, and "they're" means they are.

    Are you not a native English speaker? It is very hard to write in English. Please ask around and find a beta to check over your work and help you.

    I was so glad that Harry was able to float down to the bottom of the astronomy tower, instead of falling to his death. Very cute.

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