Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 26 Mar 2013 1:09 am
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm liking the plotline so far, but I do have one criticism. You desperately need to work on your punctuation. I'm not trying to be mean, I simply feel that your story would benefit if you did some reading up on proper punctuation.
    I will keep reading this, though, as I said before I think the plot has potential.
Title: Chapter 1 06 Mar 2013 11:25 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a very good chapter, it seems like it is going to be a very exciting story to read. Great Job.
Title: Chapter 1 03 Mar 2013 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Dudley for once does something good. And his spelling is atrocious...

    Author's Response:

    I dictated the letter to my eleven year old niece and asked her to write it as if she was Dudley. Thats what she came up with.

     

Title: Chapter 1 03 Mar 2013 8:40 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    awww poor Hedwig but she made it to a house that would save Harry. Good for Dudley but he needs to learn how to spell better. LOL Ron comment about her not slowing down :P

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