| Title: Chapter 3
| 10 Mar 2013 4:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely fast paced chapter and a little Harry and Severus interaction! what's could be better?
WOW!
great job! i love this fanfic so far, please update soon, i would like to see longer chapters,but that is my only request you are doing great!
Author's Response: Thank you I am working on longer chapters.
So far, I really like your storyline. It's got a lot of really good elements and I really enjoyed reading your story. The only critique I really have is that your grammar is kinda off, but other than that, I really like it! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Excellent, love it, very well written, would love longer chapters, cant wait for more.
An interesting twist having Dudley raise the alarm. Love how Anapestic confession was overheard.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 06 Mar 2013 1:14 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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What are they going to do about Dudley, with his parents going to jail that would leave Marge and she would be even worst then his parents. By saving his cousin has he dammed himself?
| Title: Chapter 3
| 06 Mar 2013 8:13 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I am so glad Harry is awake and seems to be healing. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the Dursleys.....torture? more torture??? Great chapter.
Harry is so lucky he is magical with the injuries you gave him. If he was not a wizard he would have been dead a long time ago.
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