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Title: Hogwarts 28 Sep 2022 2:14 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter
Title: Hogwarts 19 Jun 2015 4:44 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    The end part where Severus is holding the Dragon is so sweet, and Harry was such a doll to give it to him for comfort.

    Author's Response: I really wish I could draw well enough to make an picture of Snape with the dragon. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Title: Hogwarts 19 Apr 2013 10:24 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my ... I wonder what Madam Pomfrey will turn up when it comes to Severus. Let us hope it can be remedied. Good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Hogwarts 12 Apr 2013 12:17 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter loved the conversations between them

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Hogwarts 07 Apr 2013 12:30 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Everyone seems to be keen to make decisions for Snape regarding Harry, but he does appear to be fairly happy to take charge of the child. Also kinder than he tries to appear - a stuffed dragon AND drawing materials!I'm sure the next day is going to be very interesting for all.

    Author's Response: Everyone has always seen Snape as a tool to use, rather than a person who might have an opinion, especially the Gryffindors in his life.  Yes, he is kinder than he wants to show, but I see that as typical of a person who has experienced abuse as a child.  The next day? Yes, it is very interesting.  I'm writing it right now.
Title: Hogwarts 06 Apr 2013 11:53 pm
Reviewer: RHSW (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No, I'm not a writer, but if you're not a professional, you should be. A friend recently introduced me to fanfiction. I usually just read and go on my way. I'm just looking for a good read and you have panache for detail that sucks a reader right into the story. So good, in fact, that I had to break my silence and review.

    Sev seems to be trying to convince himself that he doesn't care about Harry. It doesn't seem to be working out so well.

    I think Albus was right when he said in canon that they sort too soon because he should have been in Slytherin. He manipulated Snape right into that check-up. Already he knows that Sev will do anything for Harry.

    Wonderful chapter. I’m looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Wow! Just... wow. Thanks for that review.  It really was one of the best and kindest I've ever had.  No, I haven't written my own fiction yet.  I'm working on it, but nothing so far. 

    You're right, Albus always struck me as very Slytherin.  He had to be.  Snape also struck me as very Gryffindor in many of the things he did, but I also feel that the sorting thing is over-rated for the most part anyway.  What eleven year old can tell what they are?  None.  They are too silly and childish to determine what they want to be, aside from the few of us who decided we wanted to join the circus or get in Starfleet Academy, or go to Hogwarts.   

    Severus is trying to convince himself that he's unworthy of caring for Harry, but apparently he's not a great debater.  He keeps losing.

    Again, thanks for the wonderful review.  I'm going to email it to my mom. She's gets all proud and silly on me when I do.

    T

Title: Hogwarts 06 Apr 2013 2:56 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It's a good thing Harry is getting plenty of rest because he will have a big day coming. Hogwarts, finding out magic is real, meeting a lot of magical folk and getting a physical is going to be a long day. And we may find out what is wrong with Severus.

    Author's Response: Oh yes.  Harry's big day will be very big for both Harry and Snape. Thanks for your review. and your speculation!
Title: Hogwarts 05 Apr 2013 5:43 am
Reviewer: missyanne (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus, despite what he tries to convince himself, he can't help but care for Harry. No doubt Harry will see Severus' actions in a much different light than Severus himself. Colours and a DRAGON...and how often did Petunia hold Harry when he was scared? Harry feels secure enough with Severus already to fall asleep in his arms. Severus is going to be a much better guardian than he cares to admit.

    Author's Response:

    Yes!  I always thought Severus Snape as a dad would be such a push over.  Oh, there would be grumbling and grousing, but he would be so squishy on the inside.  I always see him as a man who has had little love in his life. Even though Eileen loves him, her way of showing it is his way also, with harsh words that mask tender feelings.  A young Harry, with his great capacity to love and his real need to give an receive it would be the best thing for such a man. 

    As for the dragon plushie, I decided that with all that happened to him that day, he really needed something to confide to and to hug.  That's why police officers (at least in this state) carry stuffed animals in the trunks of their cars. They hand them out in emergency situations to children who need it.  The toys do seem to calm them down, and give them something to hug when they are frightened.

    Petunia.  Don't get me started on that woman.  She's as bad as Umbridge and dealt more damage to both Harry and Dudley than Umbridge ever could.  

    Thanks for the thoughtful and kind review.  I really appreciate it.

Title: Hogwarts 05 Apr 2013 3:27 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    well that made it. Severus is in a run for his money or time and what not. Harry is going to be scared when he wakes up. He will then thinks its amazing and get into a lot of trouble which will have Severus regretting ever doing the blood ritual with Lily. Tomorrow shale be an interesting day for all of Hogwarts.

    Author's Response:

    Heh.  That is all.

     

    No, really, thanks for your review. I have started the next chapter and it lookis like it is going to be REALLY fun to write.  Woot!

Title: Hogwarts 05 Apr 2013 3:12 am
Reviewer: Lady Zombie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Deep down, Snape is a softie. Buying Harry toys? Oh of course, of course - it's to "reward" good behavior. Right. ;)

    I'm also rather impressed that he didn't go nuclear when Albus said he wanted Harry to stay with Snape in his quarters.

    Bless 'im. He wants to do right by Lily. And he probably sees himself in Harry.

    MORE!

    Author's Response:

    Well, of course Snape would grouse and moan about buying Harry toys, and of course he would be a complete jerk about it, but he is a softy. 

    I'm purposely writing a younger Severus for the reason that he hasn't built the entire scenario about Harry being James. He's not quite as bitter becaue life, while it hasn't often been fair to him, hasn't completely beaten him down.  He still has hope for his future.

    Thanks for the kind words.  I'm already working on chapter 4, not too far into it, but I do have some words down.  Oh, and next week?  I have the whole week off.  Woot!  More time for story!


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