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Title: A Boy and His Mum 30 Mar 2013 5:09 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start. I wonder what the letter says. Is it the one that Dumbledore left when he left Harry or is it a letter from Lily?
    You left Severus's mother alive but without magic. Interesting turn of events.
    She may say show off and what not but you can tell she is proud of Sev.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words.  Yes, Eileen is proud of Severus, but she won't ever let him get too big for his britches.
Title: A Boy and His Mum 30 Mar 2013 4:04 am
Reviewer: Lady Zombie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! A new story!

    I liked how Snape reverts back to his Northern dialect when he's at home with his mother, and I especially enjoyed the mental picture of him at a Tesco's. I'm sure he'd be all scowls with all the families out doing their shopping.

    But anyway, I'm looking forward to more. The first chapter is a great start.

    Author's Response:

    You know me and my Northern Snape.  Note, too, that he is doing HOME REPAIRS.  I love my men handy.  

    Thanks for the kind words,  LZ.

Title: A Boy and His Mum 30 Mar 2013 3:18 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting first chapter. It makes sense that Petunia would dump Harry off on the only other magical person she knew of that was close by - Snape. Though it sounds like Severus is having some physical problems. Can't wait to find out about that.

    Author's Response: I thought long and hard about the way Harry would end up with Snape, and this was the best scenario I could come up with.  I'm glad you think it's plausible.  Yes, Severus is having problems, and they will be a bigger part of the story.  Thanks for the feedback and for reading.
Title: A Boy and His Mum 29 Mar 2013 10:17 pm
Reviewer: missyanne (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so excited to see you writing a Sevitus. I'm loving the beginning already and find it a fresh change to see Severus' relationship with his mother. I already love her. I hope you post a new chapter soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.

    ~Missy

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I really am excited about this story.  I'm working on chapter 2 right now.   I've always wanted to explore Severus' relationship with his mother.  I'm sure she's the reason he's so snarky, at least if I can tell by how she's making me write her now. 
Title: A Boy and His Mum 29 Mar 2013 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Ailsa Ek (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start. Now if Severus would just get on with reading that letter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Severus will get on with the letter in the next chapter.

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