Oh, poor, poor Harry! I'm glad he gets to stay at the castle at least. But now everyone knows why. That must be very upsetting.
I loved how Cedric's dad spoke up for Harry and punched Vernon. He was a good dad.
I'm glad Snape is having some compassion for Harry.
Great chapter. The emotions were so vivid, I almost cried over the thought of Cedric too. Well done.
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| 01 Jan 2021 11:52 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very emotional, lump in the throat time, thank you
| Title: The Champion
| 15 Feb 2016 3:32 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This is great so far. You were correct in the reader feeling sad, I am. I am glad that Amos stood up for Harry and that Severus is beginning to care for Harry. I also love how Dudley seems to me genuinely curious about the Wizarding world and is getting along better with Harry. I hope they stay in contact. You're a wonderful author and writer. I look forward to more updates. Cheers and ta.
PS: I think this deserves more than a 10.
| Title: The Champion
| 15 Jan 2016 12:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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Please continue this one soon.
Will you be continuing this?
Author's Response: Eventually. I never abandon stories. I have a lot of stories and I try to finish them all.
Love it do you plan on updating, or have you abandoned it. Hope not because I can't wait till the next chapter.
I really liked it, please continue writing this :) Can't wait to know what happens next.
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