Wow, this chapter is amazing thanks for writing!
| Title: The Flat In London
| 05 Jan 2021 1:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awww, what a reflective chapter. I liked how Harry went to watch the trains so many times. Poor kid.
I'm glad Snape mellowed. He can tell that Harry is depressed and closed off.
I wonder if anything can be done to get Harry to snap out of it or not.
Great chapter. I loved reading it and all the descriptions. It was very vivid. Well done.
| Title: The Flat In London
| 01 Jan 2021 12:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting chapter and explanation, thank you for updating this story it is so good
Loving this and looking forward to more.
Enjoyable chapter. I agree that Snape might take Harry in but I would expect him to be angry, rather than understanding, of Harry’s repeated disobedience. Still, I like Harry’s response that he wants to be taken somewhere else. I see that statement as very in character.
Author's Response: I agree, and I typically do have Snape be more strict. At this point he's still wary of Harry's state of mind, especially with how the Prophet is slandering him. The trains will play a prominent role in the last 2-3 chapters of the story as we'll see, and we get to see/have a little fun with that disobedience of Harry's in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
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