I was surprised that Dudley didn't tell his parents about Harry having a vault full of gold. I thought they had come in hopes of Harry winning though if he were maimed, it probably wouldn't bother them. Petunia can't be happy about Dudley's fascination with Hogwarts and the magical world. That was a fun chapter and I'm looking forward to more.
Ahhh! I adore you as an author, you have no idea.:) I'm pleasantly surprised you updated too! This one has me especially hooked; I had always wondered how this particular take on the story would go-the Dursleys getting a taste of what Harry's life is like in the Wizarding world-and lo and behold you've begun writing about it!:D It's lovely and full of feels and oh my word, I just love your story. So, whenever you are able to update again, just know it's greatly appreciated and awaited!^^
Author's Response: Thanks! This is the type of review that makes me want to write more (and to pick up my original novel series again and start writing on it again) :) Thanks!
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Very emotional and good angst thank you
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| 23 Feb 2014 10:49 pm
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Great idea and writing thank you
Okay, JA, you've got to stop this! Lol another well done story that I'm going to be itching for chapter. I am so glad that Amos Diggory took up for Harry, despite his son just dying. And Snape. I am glad that he finally saw a bit of what Harry's life is really like. Good job!
Poor Harry. Always blaming himself for things. *sigh* another great chapter. I forgot to mention in the last review that I really liked the fact that Dudley seemed a little starstruck by Harry. It seemed as if he was seeing Harry in a different light. I liked that a lot.
Oh goodness. Why in the world would they ask the Dursleys to come to Hogwarts?! This is something I've never seen done before. I really like it so far!
Aw, poor Harry. He has so much to deal with, but thank God that Snape is not being a jerk about it all. I hope Vernon gets his comeuppance!
Great job at capturing everyone's emotions, and keeping Snape and Harry in Character. I can't wait to see what happens next. Off to read your next story!
"What's wrong with you?" Amos Diggory demanded. "Our children are precious! Every minute of every day we have with them is precious!"
That brought tears to my eyes. I'm glad people actually saw the way Harry was treated and are finally doing something about it. 13 years to late though.
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