| Title: The Protector
| 29 Oct 2013 12:19 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great steering of the story thank you
| Title: The Protector
| 15 May 2013 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good, interesting move in the story
Fantastic job to all of you! I'm loving the story and can't wait to see where it goes.
| Title: The Protector
| 06 May 2013 4:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fiction fan (Anonymous)
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Bravo... Twists and turns abound. Very seamless transitions
This was a great addition!!!
Interesting creature. Snapes is still the git as always. The protector would pick Harry for no reason. Of course he is being abused you are just to blind and prestigious (if that's the word i'm looking for) to see it.
| Title: The Protector
| 06 May 2013 7:04 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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Man I wish I had the ability to write a story. I am loving this one. Plus a big bowl of warm milk for the Protector.
omg JA! that was soooo brilliant! I mean that explanation for the 'creature'. It's so good, so clever! I feel like you are like, leagues above the rest of us....amazing work JA, simply amazing.
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