i love this story! keep up the good work.
I'm glad that Harry finally saw the memory of Snape's conversation. He seems to have some hope again of having a family. Ian should be able to help him learn to trust his father. I was glad you included the chapter now. Poor Harry has been stewing long enough.
| Title: Harry's moment
| 27 Feb 2014 5:18 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Okey, hola!!!
Este fue un maravilloso capítulo, porque al fin has dado el paso en la consolidación de la relación entre los dos.
ahora, ya con el malentendido dejado de lado pueden empezar de nuevo a construir su relación
y con Ian sumado
en esa linda dinámica familiar
| Title: Harry's moment
| 27 Feb 2014 3:22 am
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| Reviewer: quickster12 (Anonymous)
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That chapter was great! Lots of authors seem to have serious trouble transitioning from angst to something else but you did it so well. It fit the story and your characters perfectly. It makes sense that Harry would panic and just be afraid of Snape changing so much. Really great job
Really good chapter!!
Loving the amount of angst!
Ooooh, great chapter, finally some truths are coming out.
| Title: The essay
| 24 Feb 2014 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter thank you it seems to be working out but I do love the angst!
Looking forward to more, please update again soon!
| Title: The essay
| 23 Feb 2014 5:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
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Nice Chapter ! So glad that Ian told his father. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I am sure what you have written for the next chapter is as well written and thought out as the rest of this story has been. Don't scrap it.
| Title: The essay
| 23 Feb 2014 6:39 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Loved it hopefully Harry will believe severus
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