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Reviews For Surprise!
Al fin Severus tiene una idea medio productiva para poner las cosa en orden con Harry además de que amo la idea de que planteas un nuevo verano con los tres porque en realidad espero una vinculación entre hermanos en fin buen capítulo
I hope that Snape can get through to Harry though. Great job. Can't wait for the next update.
Thoughts - Poor Snape seems to be stuck taking one step forward and two steps back. He seems to have forgotten the whole point of the weekly sessions was to give Harry “Special Support.” They should be about helping/supporting Harry. It is all fine and good that he has been using them to get to know his son but it would be nice if he also (as any good parent should be) was aware of Harry’s busy school work, sports, extracurricular schedule. He could have taken the approach that Harry “forgot” because he was very busy with school work/sports and could have used some extra time or help with it. Instead, he had Harry serve two hours of detention cutting up potion ingredients for missing his weekly “support” session. It is so like Snape to be uncompromising and punishment oriented when it comes to Harry. It wouldn’t bother me if Snape were consistent between his sons but we already know from chapter 17 that he let Ian get away with more discipline-wise after his mother died. I was just hoping as more and more of Harry’s (who also lost his mother) past filled in for Snape he would have more compassion, leniency/understanding. He has certainly doled out enough unfair punishments to Harry to credit him one or two. I also wish he had shown more concern at learning his son was in the hospital wing – maybe just a spike of fear/concern. Harry’s slowness to trust is completely realistic given his history. What is sad for me is how low he sets his bar for family. For Harry having his Dad not hate/dislike him would be a win. As a reader, I want so much more for Harry - especially, given all the unfair criticism and treatment in their past. Someone needs to make a true home for this kid. Where his is loved, valued, accepted, cared for etc. He needs more than a couch and food that he has to earn by doing chores. After all, even U.S. foster homes are required to give children their own bed. Snape needs to be the adult and get past his own issues and lack of communication/emotional skills and come clean with Harry. He needs to acknowledge his mistakes and apologize or Harry will not really even understand fully why he has been treated the way he has. Still - We all love the angst. Thank you for writing good luck with everything! |
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