| Title: Pushed out of the nest
| 16 Nov 2014 1:41 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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oh my God. Poor Harry.
This is so horrible.
HOpe Snape finally figures out that Harry is not the spoilt brat that he thinks.
| Title: Consequences of running away
| 16 Nov 2014 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg!
What horrible people!!!
I do hope that Snape finally takes him in after this and softens a bit.
Oh Snape you are in such denial!!!
Now to see what happens from here.
OMg. Poor Harry. Snape is really cruel in this story, but then again, you have kept him in perfect character. Good job!
Cannot wait to see what comes next.
Snape did a good job explaining to Harry why he was punishing him rather than just doing it. Since the Dursleys were just plain abusive with punishments, Harry doesn't understand that there is an actual reason for Snape grounding him beyond being mean. I enjoyed Harry's 'poor me' 'stupid Snape' attitude, too. Hopefully the discussion will sink in for him sometime over the next 9 weekends of grounding.
Mmmm
creo que entiendo tu intención con la percepción de Harry sobre el castigo,
sin embargo, creo que fue demasiado puchero y alboroto,
al fin y al cabo,
el Harry de tu historia si bien emocional es mucho más hastiado en relación con los adultos
| Title: Do you know why you are being punished?
| 14 Nov 2014 9:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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I really enjoy this story. I think you got what you wanted with this chapter, cos one being punished is more angry with punisher then punishment itself ;) or it just seems like that since it is easier to be angry with something material not with concept ;)
Your lecture was good too... I am getting really put out with though I will need to get better with things like that if I get kids... lectures are hard!
| Title: Do you know why you are being punished?
| 14 Nov 2014 6:47 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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i agree with snape punishment. but i think that malfoy should be grounded to snape quarters as well. that would be a good punishment for them both. they would have to get along with each other for nine weekends.
Wow! Great story, great character portrayal and depth of emotions, and fantastic writing! I can't wait for more.
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