| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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i really sorry for Harry. snape not different to dursleys. actually snape worst than them. how can snape heartless. snape act like Harry is garbage. other hand ian. he never worry about Harry.
now im looking forward to how Harry act when he learn true about snape and ian than when snape begin understand Harry and love Harry.
| Title: An iron cylinder on wheels
| 05 Aug 2013 12:24 am
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| Reviewer: Paccia (Anonymous)
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300 Chocolate Frogs.
What a great chapter!
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 31 Jul 2013 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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My favorite moment in any angst story is the moment Snape realuzes how wrong he is about Harry - no clue why - just always love it. Your build up has been so awesome - LOVE IT and as always I am eagerly awaiting more!
can you pretty please have them become a proper careing family and snape find out about how harry is realy treated
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 31 Jul 2013 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: ravenpuff (Anonymous)
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I so wish Snape would see past his hatred and bitterness and just see Harry. My heart just aches for Harry. As frustrating as Snape is right now, you have done a beautiful job writing his character. He's not the type of man to just suddenly change his ways, and you have captured that.
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 30 Jul 2013 3:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked this chapter and would love to have Harry's take on it. I still think Severus should be made aware of the condition of Harry's back and general state, but still feel angry with him.
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 30 Jul 2013 11:32 am
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| Reviewer: HeLa (Anonymous)
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Hi there,
I love your story, so please continue!
I am just dying with suspense. :)
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 30 Jul 2013 4:24 am
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| Reviewer: Librasmile (Anonymous)
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I must say I'm really enjoying this story. However, I can't fault Severus for feeling the way he does. Rightly or wrongly Lily lied to him and snatched his kid and let his mortal enemy claim him. Really Lils? Really James? There is such a thing as asking too much of people and no matter what it looks like asking Snape to just open his arms to Harry is entirely too much to ask. James and Lily both TOOK from Severus and dead or not now have to standing to ask him for ANYTHING let alone this, a situation they created by lying. I can see a happy ending. But someone somewhere will have to GIVE Severus something before he can give to Harry. That's just the way of the world.
But as I said very nice story. I look forward to the next chapter.
| Title: That night Snape dreamt
| 30 Jul 2013 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Paccia (Anonymous)
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You like story ideas? Ok... here's one. Feel free to disregard it entirely. ;)
I think the Snape-hates-Harry-finds-out-the-boy-is-abused-likes-him bit has been done and redone--don't get me wrong, I like a lot of stories that use this storyline, but I think you have the chance for something a bit more original. I think it would be interesting to see what happens if the event that turns Snape's opinion has nothing to do with Harry's maltreatment. Perhaps Harry befriends Ian/Harry saves Ian/Harry reassures Ian that Snape won't ever like Harry, and this event begins to change Snape's opinion of his oldest biological son. Later, once Snape is less determinedly biased, he can begin to piece together the truth about the Dursleys from his own past overlooked observations--missing potions, Harry's small size, etc.
Good heavens, I have to feel so sorry for Harry. Not one person is willing to actually see him standing there. And then there is poor Ian who is so insecure in his dad's care that he has chosen to hate his own brother. But can you blame him--the father he loves obviously can deny blood, so what else can he deny?
1. I hope something nasty happens to the Dursleys-but only after Sev gets his head out of the hole in the ground he has chosen--divine retribution has nothing on an angry Snape.
2. I hope that Sev learns how to mend two boys after this fiasco.(he will have his hands full!)
Thanks for the update.
V.
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