| Title: I am your parent
| 08 Aug 2014 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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So Glad to see an update! Can't wait for more!
Harry is not having a good week. The last thing he needed was Malfoy and his goons. I don't think that Ian is going to say who hit him. He already stood up for Harry to McGonagall. Harry is right though - Snape will not be happy. Both of his sons in the infirmary after fighting. I wouldn't want to be them.
| Title: I am your parent
| 08 Aug 2014 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Looking forward to seeing how Ian explains what happened to their father and Snape's reaction.
| Title: I am your parent
| 07 Aug 2014 11:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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I really liked this chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Can't wait to read more, please update again soon! I'm really interested in seeing what will happen next; how Snape wil punish Harry; etc.
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 20 Jul 2014 10:39 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Nice chapter. Thanks so much for continuing this. I am still stuck on wanting Snape and Ian to see what they have in Harry so I am not as keen on the moments when Harry falls into to the disobedient/careless role he often portrayed in the books. I think this just means I am a bigger fan of Snape feeling guilty than Harry (and maybe want Harry to be perfect)... Still, I think Harry's reaction to Snape's increased demands/expectation is very fitting. After years of mistreatment (and dislike), he does not recognize Snape's efforts to be based in care/concern for him. Hopefully, Harry can have a few shining selfless moments before this all comes to a head. Hurt comfort/angst it's all good. We readers really and truly appreciate all the effort you put into this! Please continue!
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 18 Jul 2014 2:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Sissi (Signed)
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Hi!
Even though it was short I loved this chapter. It makes us see the difference between having a parent who cares and not having anyone. I hope Snape's gonna explain to Harry how things are gonna work because it's obvious that he doesn't understand!
Please update soon:)
Silvia
P.S.
I am not a native speaker so please excuse my mistakes:)
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 18 Jul 2014 6:27 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Extremadamente corto!!!!
Muy corto en realidad.
Aunque esta genial!!! Me encanto, sin duda es muy bueno............ que haya revelado el secreto del mapa, que al fin reconozca que quiere a Severus como su papá
Solo espero que Severus pueda hacer que Harry le diga algo, y que el ojiverde se abra un poco con su padre
en fin..
gran capítulo
aunque espero que el próximo sea más largo
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 18 Jul 2014 4:06 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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I loved your version of Snape finding the Marauder's map.
| Title: A spare bit of parchment
| 17 Jul 2014 9:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Res (Anonymous)
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One of my favorite fanfics :) (oh, and it's "disappoint" ;) )
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