| Title: He’s not sleeping in my room
| 21 Jul 2013 7:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I suppose they are on holiday laughing about Harry. I think the wounds should get worse, after all they have been dirty for a few days and severus should find out accidentally by grabbing Harry or Ian should find out about the . I don't think it should make them like him but Severus should begin to question what really happened
| Title: He’s not sleeping in my room
| 21 Jul 2013 4:00 pm
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| Reviewer: pegasus (Anonymous)
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I really liked your story so far. Snape knowing there is something odd going on but not wanting to correct his thinking. Ian being afraid what this all means forhis family and Harry thinking that he should reach Snapes expectations of him being spoilt and ungrateful).
I would like to see this going on something longer. Perhaps Snape giving Harry a lot of cores, so that he can 'earn his keep' and not take everything for granted, than Harry falling ill because of his untreated infected wounds, Snape felling guilty, Ian sad and/or guilty and Harr just confused, because they hate him. So what is allthe fuss about? He was sicker a lot of times...
That are my ideas, I'm curious what you are doing and how the story progresses!
Great job can't wait til the next chapter
| Title: He’s not sleeping in my room
| 19 Jul 2013 9:25 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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so sad. *sniff, Both Snapes hate Harry so much.....
| Title: He’s not sleeping in my room
| 18 Jul 2013 6:44 am
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| Reviewer: ecl1ps3 (Anonymous)
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Ooo love it
I want to see more :D
finally harry is in snape and ian house,
cant wait for snape to find out but i also want harry angst to continue a bit lonnger .....
Anyway Great JOB!!
I will be waiting for the next chapter!!!
I want more more more, pleeeeeaaasssssseeee. I think you tossed them in to a wild adventure, say Disney. ;)
| Title: He’s not sleeping in my room
| 18 Jul 2013 1:38 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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| Title: He’s not sleeping in my room
| 18 Jul 2013 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: 1woof1 (Anonymous)
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I really hope Snape learns the truth soon.
Poor Harry. At least he will be treated better physically at Snape's house. Ian's response sounded like any kid's - concerned about how this would affect him. I wonder if Snape noticed the blood on Harry's old clothing or not? That would be something he would follow up on. I have been wondering where the Dursley's disappeared off to - probably on a long vacation so that they wouldn't be there if Harry returned to the house.
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