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Title: Summer 1993 09 Jun 2013 10:47 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel so bad for Harry, even though he's not even in this chapter, with the way that Snape has conditioned Ian to dislike his brother, even before they've got tangible proof of anything. Good chapter, though. Looking forward to seeing if Snape and Ian will be able to see that Harry is not what he seems.
Title: Summer 1993 09 Jun 2013 3:56 am
Reviewer: JulieRickman (Signed) [Report This]
    yo tambien creo que es suficiente Ian

    Author's Response: I'm not sure what language that is? 
Title: Summer 1993 08 Jun 2013 4:27 pm
Reviewer: mnfm (Signed) [Report This]
    Great! I like the way you are developing this one. I hope that Harry is less sensitive next year, so he can keep up with them.

    Please update soon!
Title: Summer 1993 08 Jun 2013 4:21 pm
Reviewer: ecl1ps3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey I love your story!!
    Please update soon!!
    Can't wait till sev finds out the truth and would have to "grovel"at harry's feet for forgiveness..
    Anyway great job...

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I'm just going to play a bit more with idiot-Snape and then things will start getting a bit better between them. :)  

Title: Summer 1993 08 Jun 2013 3:09 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I was sort of surprised that Ian had taken such a dislike to Harry but since his father doesn't like him, it does make sense. At least now it has been confirmed that Snape fathered Harry.
Title: Summer 1993 07 Jun 2013 9:39 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Personally I think Harry is better off without any of his relatives as they dislike him.
Title: Summer 1993 07 Jun 2013 7:23 pm
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope the idiot finds out harry is abused and feels guilty

    Author's Response:

    Don't reveal the plot beforehand! 

    But yes, that is basically what will happen, eventually. But I am not done playing with the idiot yet :P  

Title: Summer 1993 07 Jun 2013 1:09 pm
Reviewer: kari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape is idiot. Now He know that Harry is his son and what? Nothing!
    How can you deny a child?
    Over the Why Harry did not participate? Is concerned the his life.
    I hope that quickly understand his mistake.
    Please continue writing.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Snape is an idiot. I like idiot Snape - he's really got to get in some angst. Later on his reasoning will become a bit clearer. 

    Frankly I just didn't want Harry in this scene, so he got to stay at home with his muggle relatives. He got a letter though. 

    Thank you for the comment! :)  

Title: Summer 1993 07 Jun 2013 12:48 pm
Reviewer: Hello (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Super!! Can't wait for what's next. Good writing, but you may want to proofread reviewing your use of commas?
    Good on you :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! I will make sure to proofread as soon as I get the chance! Thanks for the comment! :) 
Title: Being a wizard is overwhelming 06 Jun 2013 9:54 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice to get Harry's perspective. Too bad that neither Snape warmed up to him during the first year. I look forward to seeing what happens when you skip ahead in time.

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