This was such a touching moment between Harry and Severus. Oh, the feels!
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| 22 Aug 2015 6:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very clever and a sweet chapter thank you
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| 08 Jun 2013 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very moving and well written thank you
Another great chapter!
I loved seeing Harry/Alexander running away like that, and how he did not just run wildely but actually formed a plan and got help from Remus! Remus trying to help was really good too, I think!
The only part I did have some problem with was when I realised that he would actually just tell them about the cutting, but then he didn't actually flat out say the words but showed them the scars instead. It is obvious that the problem isn't solved yet, even though Snape now has an idea of what is going on.
Great job and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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| 01 Jun 2013 11:42 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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very well done I look forward to more thank you.
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| 01 Jun 2013 7:15 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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I'm glad Severus found him, and explained that he didn't know the full conversation. At least Remus was helpful!
woo hoo Harry now sees that he has a family and one that wants him and will and has always loved him. I can't wait for the trial. I hope the Potters don't get a slap on the wrist and that all. I quote Filch from chamber of secrets "I want to see some punishment". Who cares if Henry is "the boy who should be dead" Abuse and neglect are a crime that needs to be punished. I also can't wait to see the reactions of everyone when all this goes down. I just hope people are not to rude to Alex cause he took down the Potters. Severus won't let anything bad happen to him. I also hope he gets resorted into Slytherin where he belongs and I am shocked that I am saying this but I hope he joins Voldemort and help take down the light for ruining his life.
Author's Response: Ufortunately old Voldie is completely gone in this tale. When he attacked Henry, he really did die. But pre-Severus I could see that happening- all of his depression and angst turning into anger and hate. I hope you like where i take this :)
I am really enjoying your story. Hope the Potters get what's coming to them.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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| 31 May 2013 9:59 pm
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| Reviewer: GEmory (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! I'm looking forward to find out what you do at the trial. Will the Potters and Dumbledore get away with it? Were there any other children that were kidnapped or declared dead? What will the reaction be "on the street" when people find out what they did? I'm definitely hooked on your story. :)
a lot of emotional stuff in this chapter
Author's Response: It's your challenge! Lol! I hope you still like my take on it :)
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