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Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2013 7:02 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Arthur and Molly understand the situation much better than Harry does at this point. It's an interesting point - the geas won't allow the slave to harm his master yet Snape killed Dumbledore. Apparently it will permit death or injury of the master if the master orders it to be done. Hopefully the elder Weasleys and Hermione will be able to rein in Harry's desire for revenge until he has the full picture.

    Author's Response: I think Harry is still too moved by the recent death of Albus to think clearly... a very unfortunate situation!
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2013 1:28 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    a great chapter very well written cant wait to read more

    Author's Response: thanl you very much!
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2013 5:26 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Humm, wonder what is going to happen now?

    Author's Response: you'llf ind out soon, I promise ;-)
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2013 4:57 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter, full of angst and rituals! I'm starting to worry about Harry, though-- Snape may be a slave, but if the rules over him are THAT strict, Harry needs to use common sense and show common decency toward him. (Another giggle: In French, I could understand about the girls and the shower; however, I wasn't using a dictionary and assumed the "geant" was Hagrid. Only when I got the English version did I realize it was the squid!!! Also, sorry-- I don't have accent marks available on my cell phone! :-P )

    Author's Response:

    thank youuu! Common sense and Harry? Hum, may not be that easy :-)

    Hagrid through the shower would be a rather scary for the girls, I thinl :-D bwahaha! 

Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2013 4:42 am
Reviewer: dancer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it very much and am looking forward to updates. Thanks

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 2 01 Jun 2013 1:11 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very different but well thought out thank you

    Author's Response: thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 31 May 2013 6:30 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fascinating backstory on Snape's situation! I did actually read this chapter in French, and I'm glad to see the English translation go up so quickly-- it helps clarify things that I didn't QUITE understand in French. For example: in English, George refers to sleeping soundly, but the idiomatic expression in French ("sur l'oreille" ?) somehow struck me as a reference to George sleeping on his remaining ear! As you can see, I'm NOT fluent in French, but I love the practice! Hee! On to chapter 3! ;-)

    Author's Response:

    thank youuuu! Actually yes in French "to sleep on both ears" means to sleep deeply, without being disturbed, it was the perfect pun for George but it didn't work in English! Too bad!

    Chapter 3 will be sent to Dash11 tonight ;-) 

Title: Chapter 2 31 May 2013 5:15 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    please update soon, this is a great story so far

    Author's Response: thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 31 May 2013 2:23 am
Reviewer: LadyFreak (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa... I'm speechless. Curious as to where this is going. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: thank you very much, I will!
Title: Chapter 1 30 May 2013 1:19 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh wow , more please

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