| Title: Verboseness
| 10 Nov 2015 1:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the chapter as not at all mushy! The ending was great very dramatic
| Title: Verboseness
| 04 Aug 2013 1:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Riddletobien (Anonymous)
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You have managed a fine job of keeping them in-character. For me that is the only interesting thing to read. I think you portrayed Snape's care for Harry after the attack very well.
I would like to point out that in this chapter, I find Snape summoning a tea-service out of character. Even if he is understanding of Harry's anger, the scene for me would work better without the tea service. Also, I think that Snape's and Sirius' understanding would have taken longer. I could see them finally not attacking eachothers troats, but not with an offer of friendship in the mix, and certainly not so fast.
Nevertheless I think your writing is impressive!
Great story. Please finish typing it. Can't wait to see what is next
great chapter please update soon :)
Maybe Harry will feel a bit better after his talk with Snape. At least he might appreciate his friends more. As a Head of House, Severus would have to interact with his students so his talk with Harry wasn't as unexpected as Harry seemed to think. I like to see them getting along better.
well who would have thought that Severus would have gotten through to Harry as much as he did.
I personally think that Ron deserves a good punch in the face every now and then and he was passed due when it comes to Harry in my eyes.
Looking forward to more. Can't wait. Update soon.
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