| Title: Hopelessness
| 11 Nov 2015 1:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lump in the throat reading this chapter. I can't give you higher praise than that thank you
Love it hope you update soon its been forever since the last one
Oh my goodness. Oh my goodness.
It's been a while since I've reviewed anything on P&S, but this deserves a review and more. I always wanted Sev and Sirius to be more cordial to each other, but this story made me want them to be friends even more. The character development you've written is absolutely stunning, so believable and realistic as if Queen Jo had written it herself. And for a moment, I actually dared to hope that Sirius would live...sigh...But the way you wrote it was phenomenal. Awesome work overall. I love how you've revamped an overused plotline and made it your own in a brilliant way. Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!
Cheers,
Moon
| Title: Hopelessness
| 31 Jan 2015 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter love the interaction with Severus and Harry thank you
What a chapter! Breathtaking action and wonderful ending filled with emotions while Snape takes care of Harry. Just can't wait for another one! Thanks for sharing!!!
That was an emotional chapter. Sirius was so courageous while he was being tortured. Reading it made me sad. Poor Harry. No wonder he was devastated. I'm glad that Snape managed to stretch himself emotionally to be comforting to him.
So I was at the dentist when I got to this chapter and it helped get my mind off of the whole thing which I thank you for.;) and I haven't felt this kind of anxious dread since reading the canon death of Sirius in the books. Very great writing and believable character development!! I hope you update soon. I can't imagine what may happen next!:D
| Title: Hopelessness
| 30 Dec 2014 5:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Marthelia Sparks (Anonymous)
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Intense chapter, compassionate and loving Snape,just luv it! Waiting for more:-)
*sniff sniff* Sirius!!!! noo!!!!
| Title: Hopelessness
| 30 Dec 2014 5:47 am
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| Reviewer: A complete fan (Anonymous)
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Oh my God. This chapter... I'm tearing up. Poor Sirius! Poor Harry! Poor Snape!!!I just wanna hug'em all so bad right now! Please upload another chapter soon!
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